2 thoughts on “mouse

  1. zelda says:

    very talented. hope you post more. i like that the storm will not kill.


    although it’s short i think the poem may have said too much, become too obvious despite the metaphor behind it … not one of my best but i’m glad you enjoyed it .. thank you!

  2. punatik says:

    I love the first line.


    *heh … yeah, it’s not a very strong poem, didn’t really do or go where i wished and i haven’t really felt like working on it … butterfly mind at the moment *grin .. still, i’m happy that you enjoyed the first line … maybe i should have left it at that?? lol

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