8 thoughts on “just a thought

  1. I have never seen that type of poetry before. I think the broken grammar works really well. It is like capturing a picture frozen in time. I like it!

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    welcome Cendrine … i break grammar perhaps, almost certainly, though it flows … i hope … *gulp … i’m glad you like!! though i have a feeling you’d like some of my more overtly soulrites more *grin .. thank you, dear soul and i hope you return …

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  2. Ashley says:

    “Time for moon to blossom dream” – I absolutely love this!

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    that line is the heart of this, so thank you, Ashley .. ever so!

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  3. Shell says:

    nooo i haven’t gone missing but thank you, Paul, for missing me anyway! it’s just been a hectic w/end in between two hectic workweeks … *sigh

    by way of torture i’ve recorded an older poem .. i like the concept even now but not sure i ever got it quite right, despite numerous edits ..

  4. Paul says:

    Hello. You have gone missing and I miss you. I miss your poetry which is simply fantastic, your podcasts which were favourites and you because you are simply wonderfully fantastical, Shell.

  5. Chico Mahalo says:

    this piece marries consciousness and imagination… and what a heck of a honeymoon…

    fun to say aloud, too…

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    *heh … deliciously put, Chico and thanks! it was a joy to write – you know, not tormented by anything, no looming disasters or broken stuff … just, as you say, in de-light .. did you get chance to listen to my reading it?

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  6. arioborzine says:

    €5.00

    There you go. That should cover a drink of your choice in an establishment of your chosing. Thanks!

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    LOLOL .. why thank you dear Ario … *hic

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  7. arioborzine says:

    Mind if I steal this, change the ‘his’ to ‘her’ and read it to my girlfriend…?

    I’ll pay royalties or something.

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    what an honour, Ario! now make that change and read this to your love!

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  8. Paul says:

    That is very svelte and beautiful. Your podcast is one of my featured sites for the week. and delicate and velvety and lots of other ‘v’ words too, a very lovely poem.

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    ohhh thank you, Paul, for the feature-link and for your most delicious comment! i couldn’t resist offering that last one, it seemed to complete that little collection. *hugs

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