7 thoughts on “nothings #10

  1. emilio says:

    I saw your comment on my poem at PWB. I came to visit and to read your work. I enjoyed the 3 poems that I read very much. I will continue to visit, and enjoy more of your work.

    Emilio

  2. johemmant says:

    This is wonderful…..a perfect capture of splitsecond thoughts compressed…..and so poetic.

  3. Cynthia says:

    oOoo…like breath slipping into my
    pores – love this gentleness.

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    ohhhh what a gorgeous comment, Cynthia! Thank you!!

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  4. giantshadows says:

    that’s really nice. could this be considered a collaboration? two visions blurred into one.

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    i’m glad you enjoyed this, shadows – and yes! it is, in truth, a collaboration … your piece is utterly gorgeous, way better than this, which is my simple attempt to honour the emotion of your beautiful creativity … so thank you, thank you, thank you …

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  5. Paul says:

    Not quite nothing, just enough to frame the moment, words like breath around the instant of loss of self. Be here now. You are wonderful, Shell.

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    “framing the moment” .. yes … i often don’t really know consciously what i’m doing poetically, muse doesn’t clarify the psychic structure she’s deploying, if you know what i mean … giant shadows has a very special vibe and muse flowed with/in it … and now i’m wittering because i don’t know what to say to your wonderful comment, Paul … thank you …

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  6. la lunatique says:

    I imagine ‘here’ to be clutching my heart and ‘now’ to be releasing

    quiet & beautiful

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    you’ve got it exactly right, Lunatique … the movement of breath and being … thank you!

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  7. Chico Mahalo says:

    mm, nice…i am fully present and falling into a bottomless Buddhist moment as i read this…

    the placement and rhythm of the 2 “there”s and the itallicizing of the “here” and “now” completes this mindful meditation…

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    thank you for such a lovely comment, Chico! you zoomed in on the heart of this tiny piece, yes indeed … i’m thrilled by that!

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