nothings #9

For a while I was an angel’s confidante. It took time for me to undress names like angel-slut. Peel truth from jealous lie. Choose the side I winged for. I did it though it was forespoken. Like the end.

Now and everynow, I come to you, beloved. I wear nothing.

Now and everynow. I bare only you.

6 thoughts on “nothings #9

  1. Cynthia says:

    awesomedown! each phrase is a poem,
    peel the truth, angel-slut, you’re
    on babe!

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    wow! adored your response, Cynthia .. thank you!

    signed
    unrepentant angel-slut *grin

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  2. la lunatique says:

    I am so glad that you refound my blog so that I could find yours, you are fantastic! This piece strikes me as profound and playful, not exactly an easy feat.

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    what a joy to find your comment, lunatique! i’m glad you saw the playfulness of this too … ’tis a bit of a tease here and there, eh? thank you!

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  3. Ario says:

    I like these little fragments. This one is strangely charged and I love the way it leads to its conclusion. Not that I really ‘get’ it. But that’s part of the fun. Everytime I read it I see something different. Yesterday it seemed bold and almost joyous, today lamenting and melancholy. It really triggers a great mixture of emotions.

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    i’m so glad you like these fragments, Ario. I envisage them as bits and pieces found in a squirrel-chewed notebook while clearing out the attic … you know? maybe a little fascinating, sometimes mundane, but all jumbled up in puzzling shades …

    i’m delighted this one behaves as i hoped it would – mood shimmery … yayyyy! muse took charge totally, said it was all about her … sent me out to the garden to play, she did … but pssst .. it isn’t all about her, it’s my attic too … *heh

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  4. johemmant says:

    Fabulous……absolutely fabulous. Huge claps and happy dances. It’s too long since I visited here, far too long.

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    ohhh my .. i was just about to say the same thing about visiting your site LOL
    i’m glad you like this .. sometimes it seems ok, othertimes it seems a soppy mess, but i’m a nightmare of a self-critic *grin … thank you, Jo .. for your visit and your approval …

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  5. randall says:

    I know exactly what you mean. Well said.

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    oh wow, randall, you’re a superb writer – so i’m honoured that you read this … thanks!

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  6. Paul says:

    This is too intimidatingly wonderful to say anything but read again and again, so rich and somehow seductive and powerful,

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    oh goodness, that word again .. hmmm .. now i’ve gone shy … it isn’t often i offer something so brazenly intimate … i’m fullmoonhappy that it moved you so, Paul .. thank you …

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