physicalia

this body’s vein-laced
pressure rises, fails
to hold rebellious breath
in protective custody,
snaps vain gravity

this time’s a-conscious
waiting stage in-venting,
you know, all that
done it, scene it stuff

humour’s vital drum
ribs pliant form,
nerveraw thrills intensify

then touch

like

this…

3 thoughts on “physicalia

  1. johemmant says:

    Really enjoyed this…….

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    thank you Jo, i’m really glad you liked this … it’s good to see you again!

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  2. Noah says:

    Ooh.

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    *heh … i think you got it, Noah *grin

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  3. Paul says:

    freefall emotion burst which works beautifully, like a sudden unfurling of energy,

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    yes, that’s exactly it, Paul … thank you! S

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