nothings #7

On the wall a shimmer hints of motion, teases still. Scarlet woman then but sanguine now, i splice acquiescent moon – to hang your shadow, maybe, in the empty space. All those missing moments, shades that clouded night, they are suspended now – aimless and immobile. In epicentric heave a lightning snap delivers life from death. Motion soothes an ache of time so my back is still against the wall.

5 thoughts on “nothings #7

  1. Sumedh says:

    wonderfully deep and beautifully composed; this was a lovely prose poem indeed…

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    Welcome, Sumedh … thank you so much for your kindest of words!

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  2. Ario says:

    Not nothings. It’s either a prose poem or you can chop it up into delicious little verses, too (as you’re probably more than aware :)). There are some truly gorgeous lines in there and (half) rhymes. You really do have an ear for the music in the language.

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    ohhhh so good to see you, Ario .. i hope you are recovering … i’ve been worried about you and the back-damage! *humph ….

    i have tried this in stanzas … switched between and beyond, only settling for prosepoem/ish here because the rhythm felt like it mattered most .. so what you said about the music of it means the world to me THANK YOU! x

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  3. Shell says:

    *heh .. this responding in your post isn’t really going to fly is it? *lmao

    thank you thank you thank you …

    you “get” me, doncha!

  4. Paul says:

    “In epicentric heave” is just superb, the sound and movement of it contain and express exactly the energy it describes. Onomatopaeic aesthetic unity, fantabulous writing.

  5. Paul says:

    Extraordinary prose poem. There and not there, energy contained in the movement from light to shadow, stillness and motion, hiding and revealing. And beautiful rhythm and sound.

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