simple draft

stars’ distant flight doesn’t break
sky silence down

here
thought moves
gentle leaves’
sweet green
tongue-soft

midnight on your breath
moves me to say …

2 thoughts on “simple draft

  1. Shell says:

    This really is a draft but whenever i tried to revise, it lost something more important than being complete … so i let it be … perhaps it will re-call me when it’s warm enough to sit outside in moonlight *smiles*

    Thank you, Ario … your comments always make me happy. Have a wonderful w/end my friend!

  2. Just to say that I thought gentle leaves’ / sweet green / tongue-soft / midnight on your breath is brilliant. Very precise and very sensual.

    Hope you’re well, Shell. Have a good weekend,

    Ario

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