after/words (triolet?)

Afterwards, there is more than silence.
Words pulse in phantom fingertips,
mapping skin-dreams, trailing wild-sense.
Afterwards there is more. Then silence.

Tenderly, thought moves mere absence,
over-arching mind to find eclipse.
Afterwards, there is more-than silence.
Words pulse. In phantom, finger tips.

2 thoughts on “after/words (triolet?)

  1. Shell says:

    oh wow, thank you, scribe!

    *happy dancing*

  2. reluctantscribe says:

    Very, very good. Apart from the structure there are also the images to relish here: words pulse, phantom fingertips, mappingt skin-dreams.

    This is fantastic stuff, Shell.

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