due to total absence of muse *sigh – i’m still plugging away at this one – here’s the latest revision …
it never was like that, more
how smooth river slid around her waist
steadying impressive rush
thigh to wing
while she, courting swell and web,
caressed supernatural
feathers
penned immortality, downed throaty
groan, kick and scream alive
float in thrash and foam
not so much inhuman as beyond her
old man’s tired shallows
previous re-write, not in stone – just hoping for some clarity …
It never was like that, more
how the river slid around pale waist
steadying impressive rush
wing to thigh
while she, courting swell and web,
caressed supernatural
feathers in such dreaming
extravagantly white, sky-wild on her.
Not so much inhuman
as beyond
an old man’s comprehension.