in the claws of silence
silver breath
holds
still
waits for a sign
that passage has been granted
that the storm will not kill
though leaves endure
quick bite and split of pure indifference
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2 Comments
I love the first line.
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*heh … yeah, it’s not a very strong poem, didn’t really do or go where i wished and i haven’t really felt like working on it … butterfly mind at the moment *grin .. still, i’m happy that you enjoyed the first line … maybe i should have left it at that?? lol
very talented. hope you post more. i like that the storm will not kill.
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although it’s short i think the poem may have said too much, become too obvious despite the metaphor behind it … not one of my best but i’m glad you enjoyed it .. thank you!